《雅思口语真经总纲1.0》话题实战训练笔记part1——2. Hometown（必考）

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文章目录

• Hometown（必考）
• • Tell me something about your hometown.
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    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • Is that a big city or a small place?
  • • 20240704
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • What do you like most about your hometown?
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    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • Is there anything you dislike about it?
  • • 20240708
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • Do you think you will continue living there for a long time?
  • • 20240709
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案

Hometown（必考）

Tell me something about your hometown.

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答

My hometown is ShenZhen, it is a big city which located in the most south of GuangDong province, China. It is among the fastest development cities in China in recent 30 years. And it’s one of the 4 first-tier cities in China. It’s near the sea so it has a very good climate.

评价

1. “it is a big city which located in the most south of GuangDong province, China” 这句话中，“which located”用法不太正确，应该用“which is located”。同时，“the most south”应该改为“the southernmost”。

2. “It is among the fastest development cities in China” 这里“development”应改为“developing”来形容“cities”。

3. “And it’s one of the 4 first-tier cities in China.” 这句话开头的“And”在书面语中通常不建议用作句子开头，但在口语中偶尔使用可以增加流畅感。此外，数字“4”最好用文字“four”来表达，显得更为正式一点。

4. “It’s near the sea so it has a very good climate.” 这句话可以稍微展开，解释一下为什么靠海会有好的气候。

现在，让我来帮你把这些点整合并优化一下，让你的回答更自然、更地道：

“My hometown is Shenzhen, a big city located in the southernmost part of Guangdong Province, China. It’s really fascinating because it’s one of the fastest-growing cities in China and it’s been booming for the last 30 years. Actually, Shenzhen is considered one of the four first-tier cities in the country. The city is right by the sea, which gives us a pretty pleasant climate — it’s just lovely to have mild winters and warm summers, you know?”
“我的家乡是深圳，一座位于中国广东省最南端的大城市。它非常迷人，因为它是中国增长最快的城市之一，过去30年一直在迅速发展。实际上，深圳被认为是国内四个一线城市之一。这座城市就在海边，这给我们带来了非常宜人的气候——你知道的，拥有温和的冬天和温暖的夏天真是太好了。”

范例答案

A: My hometown is Xi’an, which is a city with a lot of history, If I’m not mistaken, we have a history of over 3,000 years, and because of this, you can see myriad places of historical importance here, like Emperor Qin’s Mausoleum——this is where the Terracotta Warriors are. We also have quite a few other places that are very popular with visitors, At the same time, my hometown is pretty modern as well. l mean, we see a lot of high-rises springing up every year…
“我的家乡是西安，这是一座历史悠久的城市。如果我没记错的话，我们有超过3000年的历史，正因为如此，你可以在这里看到很多历史重要的地方，比如秦始皇的陵墓——这就是兵马俑的所在地。我们还有不少其他地方也非常受游客欢迎，与此同时，我的家乡也相当现代化。我的意思是，我们每年都会看到很多高楼大厦拔地而起……”

Is that a big city or a small place?

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答

It’s definately a large city, I mean, maybe it’s not among the largest populated cities in China, it’s must be in the fastest-growing cities, and it’s considered one’s of the four first-tier cities in China. If I’m not mistaken, it just has a population of 8 million, far less than 20 million in Shanghai. But in my opinion, it’s absulotely a big city refer to whatever developing speed or modernization extent.

评价

首先，你的回答有不少可以改进的地方，特别是单词拼写和语法结构上。比如，“definately”应该是“definitely”，“it’s must be”应该是“it must be”，“one’s”应该是“one of the”，“refer to”更适合用“in terms of”等。这些小错误在雅思口语考试中可能会影响评分哦。另外，为了让你的回答更加自然和流畅，我们可以稍微调整一下表达方式，让它听起来更像是跟朋友聊天。

下面是我为你优化后的答案：

“Oh, definitely, it’s a big city. Well, it might not be one of the most populated cities in the world like Tokyo, with its massive 38 million people, but it’s certainly up there. I’d say it’s actually one of the fastest-growing cities. It’s considered one of the top four first-tier cities in the country. Even though it only has about 17 million people, its rapid development and high level of modernization make it stand out as a key urban center. So yeah, I’d definitely say it’s a big city in every sense of the word.”
当然，这绝对是一个大城市。嗯，它可能不像东京那样是世界上人口最多的城市之一，东京有着庞大的3800万人口，但它绝对也是顶尖的。我会说，它实际上是增长最快的城市之一。它被认为是国内四大一线城市之一。尽管它只有大约1700万人口，但它的快速发展和高水平的现代化使它成为一个关键的城市中心。所以，是的，我绝对会说这是一个在各个方面都是大城市。

范例答案

A: Well, I’d say that my hometown is pretty big, it’s large actually because it takes several hours for people drive from one side to another, In fact, I’ve done it before. One time, I drove from the northeast of my hometown to the southwest and it took me five hours, which can definitely prove how big it is.
我会说我的家乡相当大，实际上是非常大的，因为人们从一个地方开车到另一个地方需要好几个小时。事实上，我以前做过这样的驾驶。有一次，我从家乡的东北部开到西南部，用了五个小时，这足以证明它的大小。

What do you like most about your hometown?

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答

Well, what I like most about my hometown is the safety environment, people can walk around in the evening, in the midnight, even in the small hours, and peple do not have to worry about criminal incidents such as stealing, robbing. I think the reason is most because the application of IP cameras couple with digitalization technology, which makes crimes have nowhere to hide.

评价

在你的原始回答中，你传达了很多好的点，特别是关于你家乡的安全性。不过，我们可以稍微调整一下用词和语法，让你的回答更流畅、自然。

首先，“safety environment”更常用的说法是“safe environment”。然后，句子结构方面，我们可以使其更符合口语化风格，比如使用更多的连接词和短句，使得听起来更加轻松和自然。此外，“people”一词重复了，我们可以通过一些代词或者改变表达方式来避免这种情况。

下面是根据你的原始意图调整后的回答：

“Well, the thing I love most about my hometown is definitely how safe it feels. You know, you can just stroll around late at night, even during the wee hours, without worrying about crime like theft or robbery. I think it’s mostly because we have all these IP cameras and digital tech everywhere. It feels like criminals just can’t find a place to hide, which is super comforting, you know?”
“嗯，我最喜欢我家乡的一点就是那里确实感觉非常安全。你知道的，你可以在深夜，甚至凌晨时分随意散步，而不用担心盗窃或抢劫之类的犯罪。我觉得这主要是因为我们到处都安装了这些IP摄像头和数字技术。感觉就像是罪犯找不到藏身之处，这真的很让人安心，你知道吗？”

• you can just stroll around late at night中的just表示事实上的简单性，即你可以很容易地在晚上出去散步，不需要额外的准备或担忧。
• I think it’s mostly because we have all these IP cameras and digital tech everywhere中的“all”用作强调词，它强调了IP摄像头和数字技术的普遍性和广泛分布。使用“all these IP cameras and digital tech”来表达这些设备几乎无处不在，覆盖了整个地区。这个用法突出了技术的普及程度，增强了句子的效果，使听者感受到这种技术是如何广泛地被应用来维持安全的。
• It feels like criminals just can’t find a place to hide中的“just”用来加强语句，表示一种绝对性或确定性。它表达的是犯罪分子完全（或几乎完全）无法找到藏身之处的情况。在这种用法中，“just”强调了描述的情况几乎没有例外，即犯罪分子真的很难找到一个可以隐藏的地方。这种用法常常用于口语中，增加语句的感情色彩和力度。

这个版本的回答使用了更自然的语言和一些口语化的表达，比如“feels”，“just can’t find a place to hide”，和“super comforting”，这些都让回答听起来更加贴近日常对话。同时，通过简化和重构一些部分，使得整体更加流畅，更能吸引听众的注意。

范例答案

A: Oh, as a matter of fact, there are tons of things that I adore about where I live, but if l had to pick a favourite, I’d say it would be the food, which is super good. In my opinion, Xi’an food is the best nationwide. In particular, I’m a huge fan of 肉夹馍, which can be seen as our own style of burger. I think it’s incredibly palatable.
事实上，关于我居住的地方有很多我喜爱的事物，如果非要选一个最喜欢的，我会说是食物，非常美味。在我看来，西安的食物是全国最棒的。特别是，我非常喜欢肉夹馍，可以看作是我们自己风格的汉堡。我认为它非常好吃。

Is there anything you dislike about it?

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答

As a matter of fact, there is something I dislike about where I live, that is the lack of casual atmosphere, when you see the peple whatever they are on their way commute to work or at work, they most often full of anxiety, which make feel a little blue.

评价

你的回答的基本意思挺清楚的，但是有些地方的表达可以更自然、更符合英语口语的习惯。我来帮你调整一下：

原句子里的语法和用词稍微有些问题，比如"peple"应该是"people"，“make feel a little blue"应该是"makes me feel a little blue”。另外，句子的结构可以稍微简化，使得表达更加流畅和自然。

我们可以这样改写：

“Actually, there is something I don’t really like about where I live—it’s the tense atmosphere. It seems like everyone, whether they’re commuting to work or actually at their jobs, is always filled with anxiety. This constant tension can be pretty depressing.”
实际上，我住的地方有一点我不太喜欢——那就是紧张的气氛。看起来每个人，无论是在通勤还是在工作中，总是充满了焦虑。这种持续的紧张感确实让人感到有些沮丧。

这样的表达用词更加地道，句子结构也更适合口语。我在答案中加入了一些口语化的词汇如"actually"和"pretty"，这些词可以让答案听起来更自然，更接近日常对话的风格。同时，我也试图保持答案的感情色彩，让听者能感受到你对这个问题的真实感受。这样的回答在雅思口语考试中应该能给考官留下较好的印象。

范例答案

A: Well, I suppose traffic is a big problem——it’s bumper-to-bumper every day. This is because, first of all, we have a huge population and therefore there’s a large number of vehicles on the roads. Plus, a lot of people don’t follow the traffic regulations, which creates chaos sometimes. So yeah, I do think that the local government should come up with ways to tackle the problem.
我想，交通确实是一个大问题——每天都是车水马龙。首先，我们有庞大的人口，因此路上的车辆也很多。此外，很多人不遵守交通规则，有时这会造成混乱。所以，我确实认为地方政府应该想办法解决这个问题。

Do you think you will continue living there for a long time?

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答

Actually, I don’t think I will living there for a long time. This is because, first of all, the tense atmosphere can be pretty depressing, it is suitable for work yet not for living. Plus, I’m a adventure person, I like to experience new things, to go to new places, and this can broaden my eyes, stay in one place for a long time I would get nothing.

评价

你的回答已经很好地表达了你的想法，但我们可以稍作调整，使它更符合雅思口语的要求，更自然、流畅一些。

首先，“I don’t think I will living there” 中的 “living” 应该改为 “live”，以正确使用将来时态。接着，“the tense atmosphere can be pretty depressing” 可以简化为 “the atmosphere is a bit too tense and depressing”，这样听起来更自然一些。你提到的 “it is suitable for work yet not for living” 已经很清晰，但可以稍微改写为 “it’s good for work, but not so much for living”，这样更符合口语化的表达。你的句子 “Plus, I’m a adventure person” 中 “a adventure” 应该改为 “an adventurous”，因为 “adventurous” 是形容词，而且前面需要用 “an” 来匹配元音开头的词。

另外，“this can broaden my eyes” 的说法在英语中不太常见，更自然的表达是 “this can broaden my horizons”。而 “stay in one place for a long time I would get nothing” 可以改为 “if I stay in one place too long, I feel like I’m missing out”，这样更符合英语习惯，而且更加情感化和有吸引力。

最后，整个回答可以稍作调整，使其更加连贯和吸引人：

“Oh, actually, I don’t think I’ll live there for a long time. You see, the atmosphere is a bit too tense and depressing—it’s good for work, but not so much for living. Plus, I’m quite an adventurous person. I love experiencing new things and visiting new places because it really broadens my horizons. If I stay in one place too long, I feel like I’m missing out on so much!”
哦，实际上，我不认为我会在那里住很长时间。你看，那里的气氛有点太紧张和压抑了——虽然适合工作，但并不太适合居住。另外，我是一个很爱冒险的人。我喜欢体验新事物，探访新地方，因为这真的能拓宽我的视野。如果我在一个地方停留太久，我会感觉自己错过了很多东西！

这样的回答听起来更加自然、流畅，并且符合口语化的风格，同时也保留了你原本想表达的意思。

范例答案

A: Um, I’m not sure. You know, I’ve never thought about this before. I’m going to study in Australia and l will be there for three years. What will I do afterwards? I can’t be certain now, I mean, perhaps I’ll just stay there and find a job, or maybe I’ll come home. There’s plenty of time for me to make a decision.
嗯，我不确定。你知道的，我以前从没考虑过这个问题。我打算去澳大利亚学习，我会在那里待三年。之后我会做什么呢？现在我还不能确定，我的意思是，或许我会留在那里找工作，或者也可能会回国。我还有很多时间来做决定。

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文章目录

• Hometown（必考）
• • Tell me something about your hometown.
  • • 20240703
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • Is that a big city or a small place?
  • • 20240704
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • What do you like most about your hometown?
  • • 20240707
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • Is there anything you dislike about it?
  • • 20240708
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案
  • Do you think you will continue living there for a long time?
  • • 20240709
    • • 答
      • 评价
      • 范例答案

Hometown（必考）

Tell me something about your hometown.

20240703

答

My hometown is ShenZhen, it is a big city which located in the most south of GuangDong province, China. It is among the fastest development cities in China in recent 30 years. And it’s one of the 4 first-tier cities in China. It’s near the sea so it has a very good climate.

评价

1. “it is a big city which located in the most south of GuangDong province, China” 这句话中，“which located”用法不太正确，应该用“which is located”。同时，“the most south”应该改为“the southernmost”。

2. “It is among the fastest development cities in China” 这里“development”应改为“developing”来形容“cities”。

3. “And it’s one of the 4 first-tier cities in China.” 这句话开头的“And”在书面语中通常不建议用作句子开头，但在口语中偶尔使用可以增加流畅感。此外，数字“4”最好用文字“four”来表达，显得更为正式一点。

4. “It’s near the sea so it has a very good climate.” 这句话可以稍微展开，解释一下为什么靠海会有好的气候。

现在，让我来帮你把这些点整合并优化一下，让你的回答更自然、更地道：

“My hometown is Shenzhen, a big city located in the southernmost part of Guangdong Province, China. It’s really fascinating because it’s one of the fastest-growing cities in China and it’s been booming for the last 30 years. Actually, Shenzhen is considered one of the four first-tier cities in the country. The city is right by the sea, which gives us a pretty pleasant climate — it’s just lovely to have mild winters and warm summers, you know?”
“我的家乡是深圳，一座位于中国广东省最南端的大城市。它非常迷人，因为它是中国增长最快的城市之一，过去30年一直在迅速发展。实际上，深圳被认为是国内四个一线城市之一。这座城市就在海边，这给我们带来了非常宜人的气候——你知道的，拥有温和的冬天和温暖的夏天真是太好了。”

范例答案

A: My hometown is Xi’an, which is a city with a lot of history, If I’m not mistaken, we have a history of over 3,000 years, and because of this, you can see myriad places of historical importance here, like Emperor Qin’s Mausoleum——this is where the Terracotta Warriors are. We also have quite a few other places that are very popular with visitors, At the same time, my hometown is pretty modern as well. l mean, we see a lot of high-rises springing up every year…
“我的家乡是西安，这是一座历史悠久的城市。如果我没记错的话，我们有超过3000年的历史，正因为如此，你可以在这里看到很多历史重要的地方，比如秦始皇的陵墓——这就是兵马俑的所在地。我们还有不少其他地方也非常受游客欢迎，与此同时，我的家乡也相当现代化。我的意思是，我们每年都会看到很多高楼大厦拔地而起……”

Is that a big city or a small place?

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答

It’s definately a large city, I mean, maybe it’s not among the largest populated cities in China, it’s must be in the fastest-growing cities, and it’s considered one’s of the four first-tier cities in China. If I’m not mistaken, it just has a population of 8 million, far less than 20 million in Shanghai. But in my opinion, it’s absulotely a big city refer to whatever developing speed or modernization extent.

评价

首先，你的回答有不少可以改进的地方，特别是单词拼写和语法结构上。比如，“definately”应该是“definitely”，“it’s must be”应该是“it must be”，“one’s”应该是“one of the”，“refer to”更适合用“in terms of”等。这些小错误在雅思口语考试中可能会影响评分哦。另外，为了让你的回答更加自然和流畅，我们可以稍微调整一下表达方式，让它听起来更像是跟朋友聊天。

下面是我为你优化后的答案：

“Oh, definitely, it’s a big city. Well, it might not be one of the most populated cities in the world like Tokyo, with its massive 38 million people, but it’s certainly up there. I’d say it’s actually one of the fastest-growing cities. It’s considered one of the top four first-tier cities in the country. Even though it only has about 17 million people, its rapid development and high level of modernization make it stand out as a key urban center. So yeah, I’d definitely say it’s a big city in every sense of the word.”
当然，这绝对是一个大城市。嗯，它可能不像东京那样是世界上人口最多的城市之一，东京有着庞大的3800万人口，但它绝对也是顶尖的。我会说，它实际上是增长最快的城市之一。它被认为是国内四大一线城市之一。尽管它只有大约1700万人口，但它的快速发展和高水平的现代化使它成为一个关键的城市中心。所以，是的，我绝对会说这是一个在各个方面都是大城市。

范例答案

A: Well, I’d say that my hometown is pretty big, it’s large actually because it takes several hours for people drive from one side to another, In fact, I’ve done it before. One time, I drove from the northeast of my hometown to the southwest and it took me five hours, which can definitely prove how big it is.
我会说我的家乡相当大，实际上是非常大的，因为人们从一个地方开车到另一个地方需要好几个小时。事实上，我以前做过这样的驾驶。有一次，我从家乡的东北部开到西南部，用了五个小时，这足以证明它的大小。

What do you like most about your hometown?

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答

Well, what I like most about my hometown is the safety environment, people can walk around in the evening, in the midnight, even in the small hours, and peple do not have to worry about criminal incidents such as stealing, robbing. I think the reason is most because the application of IP cameras couple with digitalization technology, which makes crimes have nowhere to hide.

评价

在你的原始回答中，你传达了很多好的点，特别是关于你家乡的安全性。不过，我们可以稍微调整一下用词和语法，让你的回答更流畅、自然。

首先，“safety environment”更常用的说法是“safe environment”。然后，句子结构方面，我们可以使其更符合口语化风格，比如使用更多的连接词和短句，使得听起来更加轻松和自然。此外，“people”一词重复了，我们可以通过一些代词或者改变表达方式来避免这种情况。

下面是根据你的原始意图调整后的回答：

“Well, the thing I love most about my hometown is definitely how safe it feels. You know, you can just stroll around late at night, even during the wee hours, without worrying about crime like theft or robbery. I think it’s mostly because we have all these IP cameras and digital tech everywhere. It feels like criminals just can’t find a place to hide, which is super comforting, you know?”
“嗯，我最喜欢我家乡的一点就是那里确实感觉非常安全。你知道的，你可以在深夜，甚至凌晨时分随意散步，而不用担心盗窃或抢劫之类的犯罪。我觉得这主要是因为我们到处都安装了这些IP摄像头和数字技术。感觉就像是罪犯找不到藏身之处，这真的很让人安心，你知道吗？”

• you can just stroll around late at night中的just表示事实上的简单性，即你可以很容易地在晚上出去散步，不需要额外的准备或担忧。
• I think it’s mostly because we have all these IP cameras and digital tech everywhere中的“all”用作强调词，它强调了IP摄像头和数字技术的普遍性和广泛分布。使用“all these IP cameras and digital tech”来表达这些设备几乎无处不在，覆盖了整个地区。这个用法突出了技术的普及程度，增强了句子的效果，使听者感受到这种技术是如何广泛地被应用来维持安全的。
• It feels like criminals just can’t find a place to hide中的“just”用来加强语句，表示一种绝对性或确定性。它表达的是犯罪分子完全（或几乎完全）无法找到藏身之处的情况。在这种用法中，“just”强调了描述的情况几乎没有例外，即犯罪分子真的很难找到一个可以隐藏的地方。这种用法常常用于口语中，增加语句的感情色彩和力度。

这个版本的回答使用了更自然的语言和一些口语化的表达，比如“feels”，“just can’t find a place to hide”，和“super comforting”，这些都让回答听起来更加贴近日常对话。同时，通过简化和重构一些部分，使得整体更加流畅，更能吸引听众的注意。

范例答案

A: Oh, as a matter of fact, there are tons of things that I adore about where I live, but if l had to pick a favourite, I’d say it would be the food, which is super good. In my opinion, Xi’an food is the best nationwide. In particular, I’m a huge fan of 肉夹馍, which can be seen as our own style of burger. I think it’s incredibly palatable.
事实上，关于我居住的地方有很多我喜爱的事物，如果非要选一个最喜欢的，我会说是食物，非常美味。在我看来，西安的食物是全国最棒的。特别是，我非常喜欢肉夹馍，可以看作是我们自己风格的汉堡。我认为它非常好吃。

Is there anything you dislike about it?

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答

As a matter of fact, there is something I dislike about where I live, that is the lack of casual atmosphere, when you see the peple whatever they are on their way commute to work or at work, they most often full of anxiety, which make feel a little blue.

评价

你的回答的基本意思挺清楚的，但是有些地方的表达可以更自然、更符合英语口语的习惯。我来帮你调整一下：

原句子里的语法和用词稍微有些问题，比如"peple"应该是"people"，“make feel a little blue"应该是"makes me feel a little blue”。另外，句子的结构可以稍微简化，使得表达更加流畅和自然。

我们可以这样改写：

“Actually, there is something I don’t really like about where I live—it’s the tense atmosphere. It seems like everyone, whether they’re commuting to work or actually at their jobs, is always filled with anxiety. This constant tension can be pretty depressing.”
实际上，我住的地方有一点我不太喜欢——那就是紧张的气氛。看起来每个人，无论是在通勤还是在工作中，总是充满了焦虑。这种持续的紧张感确实让人感到有些沮丧。

这样的表达用词更加地道，句子结构也更适合口语。我在答案中加入了一些口语化的词汇如"actually"和"pretty"，这些词可以让答案听起来更自然，更接近日常对话的风格。同时，我也试图保持答案的感情色彩，让听者能感受到你对这个问题的真实感受。这样的回答在雅思口语考试中应该能给考官留下较好的印象。

范例答案

A: Well, I suppose traffic is a big problem——it’s bumper-to-bumper every day. This is because, first of all, we have a huge population and therefore there’s a large number of vehicles on the roads. Plus, a lot of people don’t follow the traffic regulations, which creates chaos sometimes. So yeah, I do think that the local government should come up with ways to tackle the problem.
我想，交通确实是一个大问题——每天都是车水马龙。首先，我们有庞大的人口，因此路上的车辆也很多。此外，很多人不遵守交通规则，有时这会造成混乱。所以，我确实认为地方政府应该想办法解决这个问题。

Do you think you will continue living there for a long time?

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答

Actually, I don’t think I will living there for a long time. This is because, first of all, the tense atmosphere can be pretty depressing, it is suitable for work yet not for living. Plus, I’m a adventure person, I like to experience new things, to go to new places, and this can broaden my eyes, stay in one place for a long time I would get nothing.

评价

你的回答已经很好地表达了你的想法，但我们可以稍作调整，使它更符合雅思口语的要求，更自然、流畅一些。

首先，“I don’t think I will living there” 中的 “living” 应该改为 “live”，以正确使用将来时态。接着，“the tense atmosphere can be pretty depressing” 可以简化为 “the atmosphere is a bit too tense and depressing”，这样听起来更自然一些。你提到的 “it is suitable for work yet not for living” 已经很清晰，但可以稍微改写为 “it’s good for work, but not so much for living”，这样更符合口语化的表达。你的句子 “Plus, I’m a adventure person” 中 “a adventure” 应该改为 “an adventurous”，因为 “adventurous” 是形容词，而且前面需要用 “an” 来匹配元音开头的词。

另外，“this can broaden my eyes” 的说法在英语中不太常见，更自然的表达是 “this can broaden my horizons”。而 “stay in one place for a long time I would get nothing” 可以改为 “if I stay in one place too long, I feel like I’m missing out”，这样更符合英语习惯，而且更加情感化和有吸引力。

最后，整个回答可以稍作调整，使其更加连贯和吸引人：

“Oh, actually, I don’t think I’ll live there for a long time. You see, the atmosphere is a bit too tense and depressing—it’s good for work, but not so much for living. Plus, I’m quite an adventurous person. I love experiencing new things and visiting new places because it really broadens my horizons. If I stay in one place too long, I feel like I’m missing out on so much!”
哦，实际上，我不认为我会在那里住很长时间。你看，那里的气氛有点太紧张和压抑了——虽然适合工作，但并不太适合居住。另外，我是一个很爱冒险的人。我喜欢体验新事物，探访新地方，因为这真的能拓宽我的视野。如果我在一个地方停留太久，我会感觉自己错过了很多东西！

这样的回答听起来更加自然、流畅，并且符合口语化的风格，同时也保留了你原本想表达的意思。

范例答案

A: Um, I’m not sure. You know, I’ve never thought about this before. I’m going to study in Australia and l will be there for three years. What will I do afterwards? I can’t be certain now, I mean, perhaps I’ll just stay there and find a job, or maybe I’ll come home. There’s plenty of time for me to make a decision.
嗯，我不确定。你知道的，我以前从没考虑过这个问题。我打算去澳大利亚学习，我会在那里待三年。之后我会做什么呢？现在我还不能确定，我的意思是，或许我会留在那里找工作，或者也可能会回国。我还有很多时间来做决定。

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